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*All questions were asked in an intentionally leading way , and students will only be mentioned by initial to protect their safety and opinions* R- (Neutral) Was overall OK with a gaming club here at Pima so long as its primary focus is social. Gaming is fun. D- (hostile) Overall pro gaming. D was againstContinue reading “Class 11/19/2019”

Jeremy Greenfield Janel Spencer Writing 101S 10/19/19 Living with the Hand You Were Dealt I was born with Amniotic Banding Syndrome, (ABS) a birth defect that left my hands and feet missing phalanges. I am lucky, it could be a lot worse. To summarize, the amniotic bag which held me in the womb ripped. TheContinue reading “final essay 2”

paragraph 1: Misinformaiton with black student union -How much money is being allocated -salaries paragraph 2: Buildings being renovated -when buildings made -how much disrepair -The need to be retrofitted paragraph 3 : Why salaries arent as they seem -Money is for tutors -More openings for students in center -More than just for Blacks. ParagraphContinue reading “Class Work 11/14/19”

Socialism/ communism is not the answer to our problems in America. We as future voters should be informed as to why this is the case, and why our current system works so well. We should look at examples of countries that have failed or have been in major decline due to their system of government/Continue reading “Class Work 11/13”

CONCEPT WORD: Happiness Looks like A new friend.  Sounds like People laughing at my jokes.  Smells like New card pack being cracked open with my friends.  Tastes like Old school pizza my friends share.  Feels like A warm drink slithering inside you, warming every sensation.  Reminds me of All my friends, and the people whoContinue reading “Concept words.”

Jeremy Greenfield Ms. Janel Writing 101s 10/19/19 Living with the hand you were dealt I was born with Amniotic Banding Syndrome, (ABS) a birth defect that left my hands and feet missing phalanges. I am lucky, it could be a lot worse. To summarize, the amniotic bag which held me in the womb ripped. TheContinue reading “Essay 2 draft 1”

I was born with Amniotic Banding Syndrome, (ABS) a birth defect that left my hands and feet missing phalanges. Throughout my life I have been told to embrace my differences and to make the most of them, to not have people feel sorry, a lesson I think all people should learn.   I was always bulliedContinue reading “Outline class work 10/10/19”

1.) Writing about my hands, and how being able to laugh at yourself. 2.) Writing about the suicides in my family and how it affected me. 3.) Writing about my grandpas death, about how family is important.

I have come to believe that no matter how anyone is born, you can accomplish anything, and do not need to force others to see reality as “your reality” I am standing here today as a man born with a visible deformity, who overcame many problems presented, not by forcing others to accept lies, butContinue reading “Class Writing part 2: Audre Lorde Inspired”

I have written essays like this one before. In previous essays of rhetorical analysis i had never considered the audience that was being written to. I learned from the author that it is important to include facts and opinions from differing sources if able. In total about the piece, through analyzing it, I learned howContinue reading “10/8/19 Class Work”